Wednesday 6 May 2015

Rhyming words

I'm proud of myself to think of lots of rhyming words at school.  I made a poem about a scary night.  In the end I was finally safe.  It was only a dream!

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  1. My dream poem
    In the scary night
    I got woken and got a fright,
    It was really very dark,
    I saw a huge mark,
    It was all over me,
    I couldn't really see,
    What would I do?
    It's over my friend too,
    When I was in my bed,
    My face was all red,
    The next morning I found my ted,
    His name was Fred.

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  2. Hello Royden well done WOW great job that poem is the best
    I like how you made your words rhyme well done
    from Yana :)

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